tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6118393680945661388.post2946544933145494832..comments2023-10-18T05:05:50.127-07:00Comments on My English Diary: TOEFL essayEnglish-diaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03132614971566833113noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6118393680945661388.post-58445886716782809532009-09-26T17:56:38.794-07:002009-09-26T17:56:38.794-07:00Dark nights washed by distant rippling trees
and a...Dark nights washed by distant rippling trees<br />and alien winds covering your eyelids, purifying<br />like everything, move on with splendid ease<br />leaving us a message: life will never cease<br />its sleepy course in vain<br />in order to attain<br />rebirth, since Death is not and Life is dying.<br /><br />The heat around Time's corner waves a scent<br />for creedence revival of some virtual vampire<br />as deep inside. A force considered spent<br />returns from utter non-existence that was meant<br />to keep us out of breath -<br />Is Life both Life and Death?<br />Riddle of the Night! The Day be hot and dire.<br /> <br />My Poetry Blog<br /><br /><a href="http://singleswingle.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">http://singleswingle.blogspot.com/</a><br /><br />More...<br /><br />Adiós, mis vacas! Que pasa en esta temporada de tristeza? <br />La soledad se cultiva en las ciudades; <br />viva la muerte. <br />Uno no debe imaginar que el hombre es bueno. <br />El paisaje se despierta en un fiel espejo, pregunte. <br /><br />La noche ha porches de la siesta en ruinas con pistacho. <br />Débiles enemigos se disipa amigos sin <br />valor. La calle es corta. <br />Hay falta de coherencia, la esperanza y la fe. <br />Todas las puertas evitadas saludan: No pasarán. <br /><br />My tentatively spanish poetry blog;<br /><br />ht<a href="http://hollb.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">tp://hollb.blogspot.com/</a><br /><br />My philosophy:<br /><br /><a href="http://windormirrow.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">http://windormirrow.blogspot.com/</a><br /><br />Typically Swedish Next Door Girls Collection För Your LAPTOP!<br /><br />:o)My Babe Misogyn Wallpapers:<br /><br /><a href="http://screenfonds.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">http://screenfonds.blogspot.com/</a><br /><br />Feel free to announce your blog on mine.<br /><br />- Peter Ingestad, SwedenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6118393680945661388.post-29549299661867252202009-09-26T11:39:27.563-07:002009-09-26T11:39:27.563-07:00Yes you are right. Ant this is what makes the proc...Yes you are right. Ant this is what makes the process of writing tedious. You have to know not only the meaning of a synonym but also whether its meaning fits the context.English-diaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03132614971566833113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6118393680945661388.post-29102226227054491912009-09-26T11:08:52.279-07:002009-09-26T11:08:52.279-07:00it is easy! you need to check out a synonym dictio...it is easy! you need to check out a synonym dictionary. this what you can find in "Oxford Leaner's Thesaurus":<br />happy>satisfied>content>contented>joyful>blissful<br />and the others like that.<br />but remember, you can't always use them instead of each other. if you wanna find out when and how to use them, you need to study the dictionary carefully.<br />good luck with that.Mahdihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18304145234220884410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6118393680945661388.post-68834733714761068362009-09-26T00:21:00.332-07:002009-09-26T00:21:00.332-07:00There is one thing I really don't like about t...There is one thing I really don't like about this essay. There is a lot of repetition of words - 'happy', 'happiness' 'success', 'private life'... I do not know how to avoid the frequent usage of them here...English-diaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03132614971566833113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6118393680945661388.post-87755944609908690022009-09-24T10:35:43.948-07:002009-09-24T10:35:43.948-07:00Thank you Mahdi!
btw, still can't catch you o...Thank you Mahdi!<br /><br />btw, still can't catch you on Skype :( It would be nice to chat.English-diaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03132614971566833113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6118393680945661388.post-58031305520575941952009-09-24T10:19:11.194-07:002009-09-24T10:19:11.194-07:00excellent!
there are so many interesting collocat...excellent! <br />there are so many interesting collocations:<br />- equate a successful life to a happy life<br />- wipe out joy and happiness<br />- popularity is thrust upon you<br />... thank youMahdihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18304145234220884410noreply@blogger.com